2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；作者用词生动多样，请继续努力，请仔细检查单词拼写。

i think it is unadvisable to make a direct decision about things you just hearing or listening.for things may be intricate,we need search the element factor ,we need think about what factor can influence the things effect and choose the main factor. someone always complain about the final result when made a fault decison ,and always double about the person who always critised by some people,so i think it is unadvised.we should learn some wisdom of acient chinese,our ancetor forefather aiways advocate the pracitse can made true theory.for some intricate things result cant find just in its outside apperance,such as how thunder come into,acient scientist made numberous experiment about how its come in to and have encourage to break the false absurd of masses people .so we need have scientist attitude and sprit to search the true element factor when made some decision