文中词汇使用较丰富,但高级词汇使用太少;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
Wuhan is a very beautiful city.It's one of four hold cities,in China.Its temperature can reach more than 40 degrees,in summer.There are some nice food in Wuhan.For example,Hot-and-dry noodles and Zhou Black Duck.They are very dilicious.Huanghelou is the most interesting place in Wuhan.Long long ago,Libai is a poet and he write a poem.