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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33550
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Membership management system based on PHP Abstract: In the Internet age, how to take advantage of the Internet and become the more and more concerned people of the country and enterprises. The country needs better development through the Internet, increasing the competitiveness of the country. Companies can easily broaden their own businesses, showcase their products and broaden their channels on the Internet. People can better understand the information around them through the Internet platform and broaden their horizon. In the past, when companies were not relying on the Internet to expand their businesses, they were limited to the scope of their business. Clients are mostly acquaintances, others know more about the need for employees to go around, or friends, and word of mouth is the main channel for the company. In turn, most companies launch memberships for customers. On the one hand, companies want to attract clients through the membership system, and the second is to serve customers better through membership. In the past member management mainly relies on manual management of employees, in the face of a large number of member profiles, often to complete a membership requirements, need to spend a lot of time, and also brings many problems, for example: search efficiency, such as slow and poor member archives secrecy. Also can produce new problems, a lot of file data members, over time, the data accumulated, enterprises need to special place to save the data, loss, gaps are inevitable. Member management system based on web platform can be quite easy to solve these problems, in addition in the search, update the data in the membership has very big advantage, and the cost is very low. Through the member management system, the efficiency of enterprise management can be greatly improved, and the management of informationnization, scientification and regularization of enterprise management is promoted.

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