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高一英语作文模拟题:写一份英语广播稿

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:05浏览次数:4885
要求:
为增加师生对中国航天的了解,你校将举行一次讲座。假设你是学校的广播员,请根据下面的表格提示的内容,写一份英语广播稿,通知全校师生。讲座主题中国航天 (China Spaceflight) 主讲人:北京大学李博教授  时间:1月5日,星期四下午2:30 地点:学校报告厅讲座内容介绍中国航天发展的 背景、简要历程,神舟系列飞船的发展概况以及 中国航天员的情况。  
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 要点齐全,符合英语口语特点;
3. 广播稿的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
4. 参考词汇:背景 background 航天员 astronaut  过程 process  
用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

In the picture is a boy ,who is sitting in front of computer and searching for the keys to the homework instead of thinking on his own .What is conveyed in the picture is a common phenomenon that nowadays more and more students begin to depend on the Internet for the answers to their homework . Many things give rise to this phenomenon .Firstly ,the widespread use of the computer is an invitation . Just with a touch of mouse ,students can easily find the answers to the questions ,which has a great appeal to those who don’t attach enough importance to their lessons. Secondly ,too much homework makes it difficult for some students to finish their homework in time ,thus in order to avoid punishment ,some students choose to search the internet for the answers . Personally ,despite the great convenience the internet can bring us,its negative effects on students cannot be ignored .As students,We should keep it in mind that proper use of the Internet will help improve ourselves while abuse of the Internet will bring us nothing but failure .

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