过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。
In the picture is a boy ,who is sitting in front of computer and searching for the keys to the homework instead of thinking on his own .What is conveyed in the picture is a common phenomenon that nowadays more and more students begin to depend on the Internet for the answers to their homework . Many things give rise to this phenomenon .Firstly ,the widespread use of the computer is an invitation . Just with a touch of mouse ,students can easily find the answers to the questions ,which has a great appeal to those who don’t attach enough importance to their lessons. Secondly ,too much homework makes it difficult for some students to finish their homework in time ,thus in order to avoid punishment ,some students choose to search the internet for the answers . Personally ,despite the great convenience the internet can bring us,its negative effects on students cannot be ignored .As students,We should keep it in mind that proper use of the Internet will help improve ourselves while abuse of the Internet will bring us nothing but failure .