高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句过少；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

There were many green trees around my hometown when I was child. The fish played in the clear and clean rivers. Many old building standed on the narrow streets. People worked hard but a little poor. Now today, many new high buildings are there and lots of kinds of cars run on the roads. The developing of inductor makes the air pollutions and damages the evironment. Trees are receding and fish despear. We should control the pollutions as soon as possible.