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In modern society, advanced science and technology have made great changes to our life, but we still value the artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tells us about life that the science technology can not.
复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Modern cities,fancy lights,brilliant skyscrapers,all owing to advanced technology.Thanks Watt,the technology experienced development by leaps and bounds,which led to the sufficient material today.therefore，we are not starving today,we have plenty food with various choose in the range of worldwide.we have clean water to drink,we have countless cloth to wear,we have a great number of facilities to relax.Moreover,the numerous inventions such as cellphone,plane,television,all help us live a much more convenient life than ancient people.we are so lucky to live in such a modern world,with magic electric and considerable informations. As every coin has two sides,technology bring us some problems except its huge conveniency. It’s no longer strange to see people doing everything with their smart phones in hand.indeed,cellphones have taken too much focus from us rather than the happiness and beauty in our daily life.that redundant time had spent on games or online shopping or social contact is definitely exerting a bad influence on our daily routine，the loss of pleasure from reality and genuine interpersonal interaction. From where i stand,everything has its both good and bad sides.only we make the most of its strength and do our best to prevent the weakness can we enjoy the advantage of technology without being interrupt by the trouble.
