增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
I have a good friend . I like him very much . He has black hair and big eyes. He is more outgoing than me . I think he is verg good. There were be three people in this his family ,his dad,mom and he. He can play the violin .