2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

dear dad(mum), you always pay little attention to your health but spent most of the time on working, which worrys me a lot. your health is so important for me so i sincerely hope that you can make some changes to abtain a good health. here are some suggestions for you. first, it is good for you to work on foot instead of driving a car or taking a bus. second,it is necessary for you to do some exercises or play basketball or swimming in the gym for at least once a week. third, it is of great importance to form a good new eating habit by having more vegetables and less meat. last but not least, it is bad for your health to stay up late for work, so you should go to bed early. dear dad(mum), i expect you can accept my suggestions and be healthy. your daughter tom