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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒。
In this picture, we can contain that it is a long time that the boy did not take a conservation with his parents face to face. although it is a little ridiculous, but these incident is in our real lives. among few years ago, the intelligence devices have becoming more and more general. But with the advantage which the device toke for us , it also exert negative influence that we have less communication with family, friends, colleague and even the beloved. but we really need face-to-face contact. Not only because it will give us mental advantage, ease our mind, but also it will teach us how to communicate is better for both. so, the directly contact is necessary for us. therefore, to enhance the frequence of communication of indirect is needful
