作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章层次较为清晰。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Recently, the phenomenon due attention should be given to spelling has been brought into focus. With the development of science and technology, more and more people given spelling. A number of factors could account for the phenomenon, but the following might be the critical ones. First and foremost, people use electronic products. Because of the products are intelligentize. Needn't remember anything. Besides, more and more people are lazy. They like a copy from Intert every time, many of thing that don't know how to use it. We should practice every day.If we don't take effective right now, we will pay a heavy price late.