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Recent days, which kind of school can be the most benifit for the students has became a contentious topic, single schools or just co-ed schools. well, actually it's a kind of nasty problems. Either single or co-ed schools have thier own advantages. like a student in a co-ed schools can be good for students to establish a well-developed social circles, they could know how to deal with the opposite-sex, respect and tolereance. but still , compare to the pros and corns of these two ,personally , I prefer the single sex schools. firstly , social value can influnce the Education System, as we know , at present days , the whole society put huge attention on Education, many parents regard pay more atten on their children's marks. I think in single-sex schools stutents can devote in their study, there is less intrutions compare with co-education schools, like pre-mature love which is thought to be the serivious problem to affect students stady life. secondly , male students and female students show totally performance in their study, what i mean is that according the difference which can be used to seek more effectiont and more property way to educate them , Making sure all the students could get better performance when they enter the college entrence examnation. over all, seprate students via their gender also could be better for teacher to teach, for instance , girls scholl can try to emplye all the femal teachers, as I know some of the girls they fear of answer questions because of gender, which can solve this problems perfectly.
