2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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Mid-Autumn Festival A festival for the Mid -Autumn is held once a year in china , on lunar calendar fifteen,August. for this is a cheerful occasion,is a traditional festival in china. On that day, the other people will go to home reunion celebrate the holiday with their family. the many people to go shoppsing ,to buy such as moon cake ,tea, and some food. in the evening ,many people eat the dinner eariler than usually ,after the have dinnner ,the people take to the moon cake and tea arond the table eating and taling with family, The another people are take this vacation to travel, wil be can in touch with different people and something new from home town,enrich their life ,such as people value,lifestyle and so on. in other place to enjoy the moon with different people.