2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；请注意分段。

As we all konw that computer is extremely significnt to all of us.With comuter we are able to acquire a great deal of knowledge,we can get the infomation easily.However,every thing has two coins.We may be hurt as well as get benefit from it.It's widely accepted that people who used computer for a long time may suffer the diseases related to radiration like cancer.