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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake从句数量偏少;文章能较灵活使用词汇,高级词汇有些少,还需注意个别拼写错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Mid-autumn festival A festival for the mid -autumn is held once a year in china , on china lunar calendar fifteen,August.this festival is a cheerful occasion ,and is a traditional festival in china. On that day, the other people go home reunion to celebrate the holiday with their families. many people to go shopping that to buy such as moon cake ,tea, and some food. in the evening ,many people eat the dinner eariler than usually ,after the have dinnner ,the people take to the moon cake and tea arond the table eating and taling with family, The another people are take this vacation to travel, wil be can in touch with different people and something new from home town,enrich their life ,such as people value,lifestyle and so on. in other place to enjoy the moon with different people.