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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
Advertisements are existing everywhere in our lives, they are a part of life, we can see different kinds of advertisements from newspaper, TV, magazine and on our mobile phones. Though there are various kinds of advertisements in our lives, they can not discourage us from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. First and foremost, the function of advertisements is to introduce the new product of some company or to increase their ratio of marketing by telling people they are having on sale. This kind of advertisement will give us an opportunity to buy things cheaper than ever before. Secondly, some advertisements are just telling us some information we need, for example, housing renting and selling, job advertisement, schooling as well as education. We need to get this kind of information when we wanting this services, so it won’t let us do the same and look the same. Thirdly, advertisements are a kind of industry in our modern life, we depend on the advertisements to make our modern life convenient and easier, it help us save time to get the information we want, and we can get the updated information about the daily necessities. To sum up, advertisement is a good thing in our lives, it helped us a lot and we should make a clear mind on advertisement, we should not rely on advertisement totally and blindly, we should judge the advertisements wisely.
