参考词汇:
中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Mid-autumn festival A festival for the mid -autumn is held once a year in china , on china lunar calendar fifteen,August.this festival is a cheerful occasion ,and is a traditional festival in china. On that day, the other people go home reunion to celebrate the holiday with their families. many people to go shopping that to buy some food such as moon cake ,tea, and some food. in the evening ,many people eat the dinner early than usually ,after the have dinner ,the people take to the moon cake and tea around the table eating and talking with family. The another people are take this vacation to travel, wil have chance to in touch with different people and something new from home town,enrich their life ,such as people value,lifestyle and so on. in other place to enjoy the moon with different people.