2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文章词汇表达丰富，不过请增加高级词汇的使用；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

Mid-autumn festival A festival for the mid -autumn is held once a year in china , on china lunar calendar fifteen,August.this festival is a cheerful occasion ,and is a traditional festival in china. On that day, the other people go home reunion to celebrate the holiday with their families. many people to go shopping that to buy some food such as moon cake ,tea, and some food. in the evening ,many people eat the dinner early than usually ,after the have dinner ,the people take to the moon cake and tea around the table eating and talking with family. Another people are take this vacation to travel, will have a chance to in touch with different people and something new from their home town , visting different place can enriching thay experience ,making them share what they have gone through with others , such as people values,ideas beliefs and lifestyles, enjoy the moon in the other place with different people.