2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段。

As we all know that computer is extremely significant to all of us.With computer we are able to acquire a great deal of knowledge,we can get the information easily.However,every thing has two coins.We may be hurt as well as get benefit from it.It's widely accepted that people who used computers for a long time may suffer the diseases related to radiration like cancer.