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2015年高考作文优秀范文:中秋节

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:9567
要求:
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
 

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

Mid-autumn festival A festival for the mid -autumn is held once a year in china , on china lunar calendar fifteen,August.this festival is a cheerful occasion ,and is a traditional festival in china. On that day, the other people go home reunion to celebrate the holiday with their families. many people to go shopping that to buy some food such as moon cake ,tea, and some food. in the evening ,many people eat the dinner early than usually ,after the have dinner ,the people take to the moon cake and tea around the table eating and talking with family. Another people take this vacation to travel, will have a chance to in touch with different people and something new from their home town, visiting different place can enrich they experience ,making them share what they have gone through with others, such as people values,ideas beliefs and lifestyles, enjoy the moon in the other place with different people.

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