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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文章用词灵活多样,但请注意增用高级词汇,单词拼写还要加强。

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When it comes to the news or sence,we always believe what we watch and have very faith in what we seeing and hearing.However, it is misable things that we draw a conculsion from the basic fact or even just the emotion. Sometimes we will be confused by other things.As the old story goes to say that there lived four deafs in the village,and let them touch the elephant,then they said this anaimal in different shape such as stone,and other things.What'more,we can't come out the interior information from the simple thing.For instance,we put the stone in the box,and then you trust what you are looking that the box is not enough to accomodate other items.Unfortunately, you are cheated by your eyes.The real fact is that the box can still make space for water and sand.What makes me most surprised is that we never trust the truth ,expect for the thing that you are seeing and hearing, which could make a great mistake. Only when we are wise looking into the thing can we reduce the rate of making trouble.

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