高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

My Hometown My hometown used to be a beautiful town, which rounded with geen trees. The rivers were blue and the fishes played happily in their. Besides, the houses were simple; the street was narrow. And the people who lived in there worked hard and had a thrive life. However, as time goes by, things have a lot changes now a day. Now, you can see a lot of high biuldings and stores displaying in every where of my hometown.