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字数:300 满分:100分
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。
In the past, member management mainly relies on manual management of employees. In the face of a large number of member profiles, employee was asked to complete member information one-time, which can spend a lot of time, and also brings many problems. For example, the search efficiency is slow, and profile privacy is poor. In addition, due to company with a lot of member profiles, they need to special place to save the data, but they still appear loss and gaps. If company’s member management system based on web platform, they can be quite easy to solve these problems. In addition to search and update the data in the membership has very big advantage, and the cost is very low. Through the member management system, the efficiency of enterprise management can be greatly improved, and information, scientific and regular enterprise management is promoted.