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字数：300 满分：100分
从句数量偏少；拼写方面做得很棒，平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
In the Internet age, how to take advantage of the Internet, which become important events for all of people. The country needs better development through the Internet, increasing the competitiveness of the country. In the internet platform, Companies can easily broaden their businesses, showcase products and broaden their channels. People can get more information broaden their horizon from the Internet. In the past, when companies were not relying on the Internet to expand their businesses, they were limited to the scope of their business. Clients are mostly acquaintances and the company increases clients with employees visiting go around and friends introduce. Consequently, most companies launch memberships for customers. On the one hand, companies want to attract clients through the membership system, and on the other hand, company can better serve customers through membership.
