2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

A Beautiful city in china I think my hometown is very beautiful where have bule sky and clear river ,the flowever smells sweet and the food taste delicious.Right,my hometown named xinjiang,which have very large land .at here,you can see many beautiful girls and handsome boys,eat delicious foods,breath fresh air and so on.The tianshan is a good place where you can go hiking,maybe you will meet a river,the water is cold and clear,you can drink some of it which is real worth.