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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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句式变化多样;全文结构较为严谨;作者在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉,另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

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enducation pays Along with the advance of the society,people has diffrent salary has become a hot tapic. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics,people has diffrent degree and diffrent salary.First,the statistics show to us the unemployment average rate is seven point six percent,and it above the usually level.Second,it show to us the median weekly average earnings is 797,and it lower than the usually level.there are some reason made the phnomenon: first,the society is a new technogoly area that need a lot of people who has a high konwledge;second,the company perfer to employment the undergratetude,because they think the undergratetude could made the high profit to the company. As far as i concerned,the gorverment should take some measures to change the phnomenon.such as help some people who has a low degree to get the konwledge,let they have fair to get some job.we should take care of the salary people.

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