2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

A Beautiful city in china I think my hometown is very beautiful where have blue sky and clear river,the flower smells sweet and the food tastes delicious.Right,my hometown named xinjiang,which have very large land .here,you can see many beautiful girls and handsome boys,eat delicious foods,breath fresh air and so on.The tianshan is a good place where you can go hiking,maybe you will meet a river,the water is cold and clear,you can drink some which is real worth.