高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；适当增加高级词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多。

there are a lot of cities in China which you prefer to visit to.Today I introduce a well known city, Nanjing, to you. Nanjing is lacated in the southeast of China as the capital of Jiangsu privince.it is one of the big cities in china not only big area but also the big population which is 5 millions people.Otherwise,Nanjing has more than 2400 years histroy ,ten dynasties choose Nanjing as their capitals.besides the old history,Nanjing is also a beautiful city.there are a plenty of must-seen,such as Xuanwu lake,Jiming temple,and Stone City and so on. During the latest thirty years,with the development of economy,Many morden factories and shopping malls were bulit here and there,you can find that Nanjing is an ancient and morden city.