2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；作者词汇量积累不错，能较灵活地使用高级词汇；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。

My views on online shopping Recently, the phenomenon of shopping online has been brought into focus. Now, shopping online has been become a fashion style. A number of factors could account for the Phenomenon problem, but the fallowing might be the critical ones. First and foremost, if you want shopping online,the package is fast and convenient. And there are kinds of products on online stores. Besides, shopping online is makes us became more and more lazy. I have no ideal. Sometimes, we can't buy a suitable clother for ourselves. Last but not less, with the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that shopping online is a good ideal. On the whole, a series of measures should be adopted to prevent unfavorable impact on us. We can