2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些

The mobile phone in daily life As is vividly depicted in the carton above, more and more people used mobile phone in daily life. The reasons for the phenimenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, attribute it to the following factors. Firstly, people like used cellphon, used for computar games and so on. Secondly, a lot of thing through mobile phone got. For example, news and everything. Lastly, our works usually be doing in our phone. To sum up, it is essential for us to stop. Only in this can we will not pay a heavyprice later.