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I think college years have really prepared me for my future life. As a college student, not only have I gained a lot of knowledge but also learned a lot about how to be a valuable person. I still remember the first month when I stayed at my university, what impressed me most was that the teachers were all much more learned than those of my senior school,since I major in English, the teachers all spoke English in class,whose English is so fantastic that it attracted me greatly . It inspired me to work hard, so that I could also master English as well as them,I listened carefully in class, took notes in detail,after class I often go to library to add more knowledge which I can not get in class. The library of my university is also a good teacher who has taught me many useful things which I can't absorb from anywhere else. With the help of my teachers ,the library,and my hard work, I have got scholarship every term and passed degree 4 and degree6 in the past 4 years. besides learning, I learned a lot about how to communicate with others,the dormitory is a good place for me to learn to be an enthusiastic and kind girl,the positive cultural environment such as unity,diligence ,also helped me a lot. So I think I have made full preparation for the future,though I may experience many unexpected hardships ,I trust myself,I think I can.
