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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11309
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中衔接词丰富;文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达,高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样。

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The mobile phone in daily life. As is vividly depicted in the carton above, growing individuals people used mobile phone in daily life. The reasons for the phenimenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, attribute it to the following factors. Firstly, people like used tellphone, used for computer games and so on. Secondly, lots of things through mobile phone got. For example, news and everything. Lastly, our works for the most part be doing in our phone. To sum up, it is essential for us to stop. Only in this can we will not pay a heavyprice later.

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