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Welcome to my hometown. I think the most intersrting place is Wuhan University.Why is the Wuhan University? Firstly, the porpour of cherry flowers in Wuhan. And you needn't go to Japan for seeing cherry flowers.we can see many of cherry flowers in Wuhan University. More and more people see it from around the world in spring every year. Secondly, there are a lot of special food. Do you like eat it? Now, I can imagine kinds of food in my head. Lastly, Many of students like Wuhan University for studying. Ah, I want to tell you news, Huang cancan in Wuhan University that she is actor. In a word, the worth of sightseeing in Wuhan. I am looking forward to going to my hometown. You will like it.
