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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中衔接词丰富；文章用词太过单一；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练。
Our parents are love us.But we and the parents is not a place.So we and the parents can't have a communication in face to face,we only have a communication on Internet.It seems that computer could let have a communication in deffience a place which can call very convenient,but due to that we have a few hugs of our parents.In recently years,it's have explosive growth what coverage of mobilephone.
