2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education play a important role in our life,it affect our earning and unemployment rate directly.we can know from the above data. the more education they have,the more money they earn.people have professional degree are the highest earnings and the lowest unemployment rates. people who have less than high school diploma just earn 451dollars per week .less than the average earnings in 2011.but we can see that the doctoral degree have a less earning than professinal degree and the unemployment rates higer .maybe this is beacuse the more education people have, the higher require they want. at last ,i want to summrize that get more education as you can as possible. you will get more in your education.