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nowadays,with remarkable increase of business,productions are coverd with elegent and beautiful packaging.so this phenomenon which called "excessive packaging" in socity is not peculiar. why this phenomenon appeared?i clamied the reason is business competition.most of those companies are aim to promote and sell out their production, they will take vares of measuers to achieve their goal. therefore,packaging is just one of approaches to promotiing.obviousely,a looked-well production usually can attracte more people.if time and money are linited,high quality and elegent appearance will not exited at same time. as a wisdom customer,i do not advocate the way excessive packaging to atteacte us, i argue the view that we should pay more attion productions'quality,rather than their appearances.in long term,companies should focus on quality and practial effection for the long and stable devolpment.
