2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,with devolpment of business and society,productions are covered with elegent and beautiful packaging.So this phenomena which called "excessive packaging" in socity is not peculiar. Why did this phenomena appear?I claimed that the reason is business competition.Most of those companies are aim to how to promote and sell out their production.They will take vares of measuers to achieve their goal. Therefore,packaging is just one of approaches to promotiing.Obviousely,a looked-well production usually can attracte more people.If time and money are limited,fcompanies will not meke production with high quality and elegent appearance at the same time As a customer,i do not advocate the way excessively packaged to atteacte us. I argue the view that we should pay more attion productions'quality,rather than their appearances.In long term,companies should focus on quality and practial effection for the long and stable devolpment.