2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇使用熟练，在单词拼写方面要继续努力；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,with devolpment of business and society,productions are covered with elegent and beautiful packaging.So this phenomena which called "excessive packaging" in socity is not peculiar. Why did this phenomena appear?I claimed that the reason was business competition.Most of those companies are aim to how to promote and sell out their production.They will take various measuers to achieve their goals. Therefore,packaging is just one of approaches to promotiing.Obviously,a looked-well production can attract more people for the most part. however,companies which are limited to money and time will not make production with high quality and elegent appearance at the same time As a customer,i do not advocate the way excessively packaged to atttract us. I argue the view that we should pay more attention to productions'quality rather than their appearances.In long terms of devolpment,companies should focus on quality and practial effection.