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Dear Pacival, I am thrilled to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can't wait to see you again.I am miss everything when I was in your city,and your parents and you were so kind to me and I will try my best to make your stay an enjoyable and memerable trip this time. My home town,Changsha,is the capital of Hunan province and is best known as the star city,There are numerous places and attractions worth recommending,and YueluMountain is the first one that I'd like to introduce to you.Firstly,in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy.It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty.seacondly,after a half hour,we will reach the Bird Forest.There are various rare birds which can sing,perform.Soonly,After about an houragain,we will arrive to the peak,Baiyun Summit.The scenery is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panoramafor the whole city。 I bet you will be excited of all these activities,and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting for us to explore.All you need to do is pack up and come to my hometown,and I am sure that this trip will be a great fun to you。Should you have any question and suggestion,please let me know。I am looking forward your arrival。 Yours sincerely, Romeo