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Dear Pacival, I am happy to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can't wait to see you again.I am miss everything when I was in your city in where your parents and you were so kind to me. So as too,I will try my best to make you stay an enjoyable and memerable trip on my hometown. My hometown,Changsha,is the capital of Hunan province and it is best known as the star city.There are a great deal of places and attractions worth recommending in YueluMountain where is the first places that I'd like to introduce to you.Firstly,the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy where has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is the characteristic of Song Dynasty.Secondly,we will reach the Birds Forest.There are various rare birds in which we can listen to the singand look to the perform of the birds.Finally,we will arrive the peak,Baiyun Summit.The scenery in there is spectacular and we will have a wonderful panorama for the whole city。 I bet you will be excited of all these activities,and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting for us to explore.All you need to do is pack up and come to my hometown.I am sure this trip will be a great fun to you。Should you have any question and suggestion,please let me know。I am looking forward your arrival。 Yours sincerely, Romeo
