拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
Erica is one of my best friend .she is love of learning and sporting. she was born anhui and live in wuhan city . Erica is thirty years old and have been married eight years ago. she is working for a furniture factory. She get up at six o'clock everyday. she goes to work on foot for thirty minutes and then transfer to a bus for eighteen minutes