小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,she is very beautyful,she has curly hair,long and shiny,her eyes are very dark and bright.She is a clever girl,she likes reading books,she is good at sports,she likes to go shopping,she is very love to dress up herself.she is also nice,we all like her.how about your friend?