复杂句使用不错,句法规范;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;请作者增加词汇丰富度。
My new teacher is english teacher,she is very beautiful,she has long curly hairs,she has a bright red mouth,her sound is very nice,we all her's class. In her class,sometimes she is strict,if somesone pays no attention to her in class,she will be very angry.but we are very happy,because for her humor.