Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;可适当增加从句的使用。
There is not denying the face that Internet has change our life greatly.We can use Google to find what we want to know quickly.So an increasing number of people ask that "Once I learn how to use Google ,isn't that all the education I really need" which like above picture description.However I feel just opposite,the picture warns us that education not only meaning obtain information.the practice is the more important thing. For one,education also includes ideal thinking and practice rather than mere remember the knowledge.For another,when we learn some things,we should hold the critical view,thinking is the essential process when we learning.Learning without thinking lead to confusion.