2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In my opinion, Baiyun Mountain is the most interestingplace.It's beautiful. In Guangzhou , Baiyun Mountain is the famous mountain ,because Baiyun Mountain is tall and beautiful .It's has many hull and have many trees . At weekend ,parents are trallves with there're children . First , Baiyun mountain have many famous foods , for example Tofu flower ,Pig red soup an so on. That are delistrous , and the foods are make of Baiyun Mountain's warter. Familys are love the food. Second, Baiyun Mountain have many insect and birds . For example , butterfly , peacock and so on .Third , Baiyun Mountain have many activity , such as family activities , commemorative activities and so on .And you can breath the flesh air. I think my friend can have fun .