托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；可适当增加高级词汇的使用量。

some people prefer to live in a rural area,they think the rural places is better peace than the city filled with people and bustling. but in my opinion,i prefer living in the city,i think maybe it just because i like the bustling and crowd. i grew up in a little town where i spent most time of my life with my fellows and parents on . i can still remember that sense i grew up with so much much loney sense .and so i like to have a borther or sister to keep me company.even if that dreams didn't come true,but i still want to go to a college in a big city ,and now ,i live in LA,and i live with my big family ,my husband ,my little son ,and my parents ,and i have a job in a working building ,i think i am very happy,if i live in the rural area ,maybe i can't feel the bustling sense. so i prefer living in the city.