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2002年专八英语作文真题:Personal quality

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要求：: 题目 SOCIABILITY: THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSONAL QUALITY OF A UNIVERSITY SUTDENT
说明 All of us would agree that in order to be successful in the present-day society, we university graduates have to possess certain personal qualities that can enable us to realize our aim. What do you think is the most important personal quality of a university graduate? Write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic: THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSONAL QUALITY OF A UNIVERSITY STUDENT
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：300满分：100分

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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

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How your personal quality is most important in society to look forward to be success. As far as I know, the university is like a little size of the society and this place will train yourself to improve to get along with anyone which maybe is a student or friend. All we have to do is how long it take to enhance your person quality.

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