文中从句数量过少;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Mr.Johnson We are received three thousand product in Dec. 22nd, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, product number ought to three thousand and five hundred pieces. We are not received other five hundred pieces. Please check your product list, and feedback to us. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours Sincerely~!