作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear Mr. Johnson We are received 3,000 products on Dec. 22nd, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, product number should be 3,500. We are not received another five hundred pieces. Please check your product list, and feedback to us. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours Sincerely~!