采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
How your personal quality is most important in society to look forward to being successful. As far as I know, the university is like a little size of the society and this place will train yourself to improve to get along with anyone which maybe is a student or friend. All we have to do is how long it take to enhance your personal quality.