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文中拼写错误偏多了；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
It's true that recent years, serious climate changes are becoming common, Tsuman typhone airpollutions which disturb human so much. These phonomeons are all relative to the human activates. So what should we do ? some people say it's too late to do anytihing to problem, other people believe that efftcive measure could be taken to stuck things getting servious. It's tipping point for humans, however it's not too late to take another prictice. back to decades ago , people didn't relase the importance of Environmental System, bunch of bussinesses were built at the coast of environment, hunders of thundens of tress was cutting down, facturies elimiated polluted water into the river, all these actives made our home land condition worse. But now things changed ,more and more people relaised the importence of protacting our home land. Take our country for instence, Goverments authourities make no effort ot publish the masses how and why we should protect environment, people know to establish this faith need not only one genration, so you can catch the ideas of it which was writen to the textbook for educating. and lots of environmental propecting law were enforced. Our goverment also fund a huge capital to protact environment ,like tree planting plan,griound water purifying ect. with the effort of everone, we can see a huge improvement in environmental proctacting. Over all, I believe as long as we make efforts , our mother land will be getting better in the near future.
